Sunday, 10 June 2012

Successful Writing

Each child in Room 6 have a specific goal or goals around their writing. Today Brodi was learning to add more detail to her writing so that it is more exciting for the reader. I like the way she added words like quickly, warm, snuggled, and suddenly in her story which made it more exciting to read. Well done Brodi.


Keegan enjoys using his imagination and will write some very clever fictional stories. Listen to this one about robots.


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